The charts show the main methods of transport of people travelling to one university in 2004 and 2009. Summarise the information be selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given pie charts compare the percentage of
students
using five different means of transportation (Car
, Train
, Bus
, Bicycle, and Walking) to travel to a particular university during
2004 and 2009.
It is noticeable that travelling by Change preposition
between
train
was the least favored
form of transportation, Change the spelling
favoured
while
there was a change, from cars to buses, for the most commonly used form of transport over the five year
period.
In 2004, just over half of Add a hyphen
five-year
students
traveled
to the university by Change the spelling
travelled
car
, with only a third taking a bus
. The remaining students
rode a bike, went on foot or took a train
, with the figures being 9%, 4%, and 3% respectively.
However
, with the construction of a new bus
stop in 2008 and the introduction of car
parking fees in 2006, in 2009 the number of students
commuting by car
dropped to 28%, and consequently
the number of students
travelling by all other methods increased. Those travelling by bus
increased to 46%, bicycle user’s
rose to 16%, and both Change the noun form
users
user
train
travelers
and walkers increased by 1% and 2% respectively.Change the spelling
travellers
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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