People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge, etc.). Why do you think people attend colleges or universities?

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It is said that entering
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thing in our life.
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,in my opinion,you don't have to attend
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if you don't want
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.For some
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the
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people
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it is only a waste of time.
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,universities and colleges were created to help
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studying
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they like the most.
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enter the
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to connect their life with engaging things.
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,my sister's dream job was
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teacher.She always was interested in studying and caring.
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to
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,when she graduated from school she
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qualification.
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,that was tough for her.In
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you have to stay calm and patient to be the perfect teacher for the children.
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,she is pleased with her choice and she is
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children in high school.
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,for some
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even studying at school is not a piece of cake.For them studying is not a part of developing,it is a
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from day to day.In the modern
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it is quite popular when parents make their children enter
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without giving them any choice.From my point of
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it is terrible.All
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must have
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to do what they want with their life.On one hand,attending universities can help you with searching for work.
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,now you can learn mostly everything by yourself.
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,adolescents can earn money without wasting time on useless things. In conclusion,modern universities provide us with a wide range of study programs.That help to make student curious about attending
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,plenty of today's students don't want to attend it,because they can learn all useful things by themselves
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