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some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always the good thing

#people #lives #change
Many
people
 argued about changes in
life
. The first claims that
people
 should do one thing all
life
. An alternative belief regards
this
 as changing is a good part of
life
 for everyone. In
this
 ,essay both points of view is going to be examined and a particular option will be provided. On the one hand,
people
 who do not like changing in their
life
 are old
people
. They lived in other times,
for instance
, my friend`s grandparents used to live in communism time
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 when
people
 could choose only once their future niche. My friend is an accountant and he has the same 1 salary. His job does not require some improvements in his mind. He does not strive to improve his mind, because he has old nurture. On the one ,hand we are living in a capitalist time in the technology era and the world is changing every year. We have to be fit. In my perspective, changes are improving our brains and we have to learn something as much as possible.
For instance
, I was a bookseller and I had the same salary as my friend.
Nonetheless
, I have changed my niche. I have been working in IT since 2020 and I earned more money than my friend. I can buy expensive things or give part of my money to charity organisations. I am supposed to be a wise person in my company
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 because
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 always try to change something.
Nevertheless
, it is necessary to take into account all the circumstances of each individual case.
To sum up
, I firmly believe, that making changes are marvellous and you can improve your mind.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • status quo
  • stagnation
  • routine
  • comfort zone
  • predictability
  • specialization
  • innate
  • personal growth
  • adaptability
  • fast-paced
  • new horizons
  • equilibrium
  • progress
  • dynamic
  • transformation
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