In today's era online shopping has been trending among
people
, because it is
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tool that
people
buy anything at any
time
in a
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very easy way,
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it may lead to
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done all shopping
mallFix the agreement mistake
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and small
shops
in cities and towns. I firmly agree with the given statement and my
reasons
for
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will be discussed in
further
paragraphs.
out of all the
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online shopping would be close all
shops
in cities and towns,
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is that today more
people
buy
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productFix the agreement mistake
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or
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from online
, because they get more
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and lots of
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.
Therefore
,
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of
will
be reduceChange the verb form
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in
and
citiesChange the noun form
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shops
.
Furthermore
,
people
notChange the verb form
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get
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productFix the agreement mistake
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in their near
shops
but they can
onlineCorrect pronoun usage
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very easily.
For instance
,
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model of phone can not available for 1 week on
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shop but
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available on online
like
, amazon
...
another
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to support my stand is that if
people
buy every
product
from Change preposition
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online
then
no one can go for that
onChange preposition
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shops
. It is true that
people
find
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way
withChange preposition
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so
itsReplace the word
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available online.
For Example
, working
people
does not have
time
to go shopping in
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so
that Correct word choice
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they buy basic daily use
product
from Change preposition
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online.
Such
as milk, vegetables etc...
, online shopping give more facilities and option to their customer compared to local
shops
and
mall
,
as a
resultAdd the comma(s)
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more and more
people
attract
towardChange preposition
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online shopping. To
, any person can buy foreign
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or goods with just one click.
Some
people
argue that
although
online shopping, local
shops
and
still alive in future there will be no change. That means today
people
have
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to buy
from Change preposition
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online but still they go their near local
shops
for their basic
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, online shopping take
time
not provide things on
time
while
emergency Like
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of
.
To wrap up the discussion, it can
saidChange the verb form
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that
although
basic necessary
buyFix the infinitive
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from local
shops
, my reason
such
as easy
as well as
cheap price shopping from online
will be close
localChange preposition
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and
mallFix the agreement mistake
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in future.