the graphs show basic information about employment.
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is a topic which revealed comparing the employee including females and males from 1995 to 2005 in five countries. It was a statistic for employees' gender and Linking Words
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the bar chart, it revealed female labour was less than male labour from 1995~2005. In the past year, we could find the smallest female labour was in New Zealand, it was nearly around 25% of the population in 1995. Linking Words
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of female employees was in Switzerland, it almost doubled the situation. Use synonyms
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to 2005, ten years later, we could find the picture revealed the largest Linking Words
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of male employers in Iceland since 1995, it was continuously increased population during the past ten years.
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Overall
, we could find the male-employer’semployer ratio was balanced and equal between 1995 and 2005, Linking Words
nevertheless
, we could compare the female employers between 1995 and 2005, the USA and New Zealand had increased more than other countries.Linking Words
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