the graphs show basic information about employment.

the graphs show basic information about employment.
This
is a topic which revealed comparing the employee including females and males from 1995 to 2005 in five countries. It was a statistic for employees' gender and
amount
.
According to
the bar chart, it revealed female labour was less than male labour from 1995~2005. In the past year, we could find the smallest female labour was in New Zealand, it was nearly around 25% of the population in 1995.
Conversely
, the largest
amount
of female employees was in Switzerland, it almost doubled the situation.
On the other hand
, the male employer’s
amount
is always more than the female's. By the time to 2005, the result had changed, the number of female workers increased in New Zealand and more than in Australia,
however
, Australia became the
last
one in the bar chart.
While
to 2005, ten years later, we could find the picture revealed the largest
amount
of male employers in Iceland since 1995, it was continuously increased population during the past ten years.
Overall
, we could find the male-employer’semployer ratio was balanced and equal between 1995 and 2005,
nevertheless
, we could compare the female employers between 1995 and 2005, the USA and New Zealand had increased more than other countries.
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  • employment sectors
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  • recessions
  • booms
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  • qualifications
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