Although more and more people read news on the internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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life is
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, which assisted
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in obtaining
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news
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from anywhere and anytime in the world. Even though
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is modern and
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, Newspapers are traditional and genuine. I strongly agree that
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remains
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source of
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.
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acquisition process through
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facilitates categorizing
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, which saves large time.
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, required
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are
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shared among
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users easier with just one click. It is widely accepted that
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lacks the quality of reading and gains
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unhealthy practices. Fake
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on the
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being reported by the global population
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enormous. Despite
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issue,
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prefer to read
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on the
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.
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leads to unwanted controversy or conflicts among the public.
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produces a wide range of information covering all the fields. A popular belief is that the readers are mostly retired old age
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. Apart from that, boosting abilities
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concentration power and patience level.
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protection
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had been raised
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among readers. There
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a few drawbacks.
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content, which attracts many individuals to set their
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. More
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nowadays, realize their technological misunderstandings and create
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free environment.
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gradually replaces
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in future. It can be concluded that
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has added advantages
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.
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newspaper
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is being dominated by
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in today's modern world, Newspapers never failed to get rid of
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's attention.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • reliable
  • credible
  • focused
  • immersive
  • tangibility
  • tradition
  • access
  • digital devices
  • demographics
  • older generation
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