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The table shows the amount of money given to developing countries by the USA, EU countries and other countries from 2006 to 2010. (Figures are in millions of dollars)

The table shows the amount of money given to developing countries by the USA, EU countries and other countries from 2006 to 2010. (Figures are in millions of dollars)
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the table compares the quantity of money the USA,
EU
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countries
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 and other nations donated to developing
countries
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 between 2006 and 2010.
overall
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, it can be seen clearly that the spending of the USA on other
countries
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 was far higher than
EU
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 and others. remarkably, all figures enjoyed a steady upswing throughout the surveyed period. in 2006, the US expenditure on developing
countries
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 hit its peak of $9.8
million
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, followed by the figure for
EU
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 nations. 2 years later,
while
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 the donation of
EU
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countries
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 just increased by $ 0.8
million
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 to $ 3.9
million
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, the US spending grew to $17
million
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. until the end of the period, $4,1
million
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 was given to other poor
countries
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 by the
EU
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. meanwhile, the amount of money spent on donations in the US followed a significant growth, accounting for $20.3
million
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 in 2010.
in addition
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, other
countries
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' expenditures increased minimally throughout the 4 year period,
this
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 category grew by only $0.9
million
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 to $ 3.7
million
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 in 2010. the same pattern was recorded in the total spending,
this
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 figure rose continually until 2008,
then
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 dropped to $ 23,5
million
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 before soaring in 2010.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words eu, countries, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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