You have left college but you didn't say goodbye to your friend who lived in the room with you because he had a course that time. Write a leeter to him. In your letter Apologize and tell him how you spent the day when you left. Tell him how you got home. Invite him to visit you.

Dear Roger, I hope
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letter finds you well. As you know, I had finished my course and the time to say goodbye has come. Unfortunately, was impossible to
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you because I had to take the train to my city. Since 7 am, I was dedicated to
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my
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and
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cleaning
the room in order to don't leave a mass for you. Don't worry about the transport to the train station. Despite
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said me that would
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me with it, I've taken a taxi. To be honest, I was
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you to say goodbye personally, but you stayed out until the time to go. I admit that I feel so sad to
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to leave because our friendship is very important to me. I really hope that you came to my home to visit me, and in order to
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you, I will arrange a bedroom exclusive for you. Looking forward to hearing from you when you will
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. Best wishes, Franklin.
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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