A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter . explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday . describe some possible disadvantages . say whether you would like to go with your friend this summer

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Dear John, It's so nice to have news from you since I haven't heard from you in a

while

! Hope you're great. I've received your letter about you going on camping and let me tell you

that is

a great decision of yours, you'd really enjoy the feeling of being surrounded by nature and the chance that you'll have to forget all your daily problems!

However

, I'll say that not everything is as great as it sounds, being outdoors could be dangerous sometimes, just be aware of the spiders!!!

Also

, don't forget to carry with you an extra blanket just in case the night turns cold. I'm pretty busy at the moment dealing with a lot of work but I'll try to do my best to be with you as soon as I can. It sounds terrific going on camping together and being outside of

this

crazy "concrete jungle". I look forward to meeting you soon. Best wishes, Nico

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

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adventure
serenity
outdoors
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wildlife
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physical demands
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