modern societies need specialists in certain fields, but not in others. Some people therefore think that governments should pay university fees for students who study subjects that are needed by society. Those who choose to study less relevant subjects should not receive government funding. Would the advantages of such an educational policy outweigh the disadvantages?

Demand for specialists
in particular
fields is getting increased in
this
fast-paced community.
Whereas
some people argue that
this
gap in experts required can be filled by providing special funding for those who choose to
study
these on-demand
courses
. They
also
believe that the
students
who choose to
study
other
courses
should not be encouraged by providing government funding. I definitely agree with the statement provided in the question.
Firstly
, providing educational benefits to some on-demand
courses
can help society by producing more specialists in that field.
Although
, it is equally important to note that government funding can attract
students
who might not be much interested in a particular course, but decided to
study
because of financial help.
This
can leave no choice for most of the
students
to choose the course of their interest.
For example
, in the early ,2000nd There was plenty of supportive funding for
students
who wanted to
study
computers and that made a difference in the number of people who chose it.
On the other hand
,
this
way of providing benefits for particular
courses
, there is a high chance of getting deficient in experts in present undemanding
courses
.
For example
, in 2000th people chose computers and still there is plenty of unemployed in that course. The current requirement
in particular
fields is high because in the ,past those
courses
were not in demand.
To conclude
, providing government funding is beneficial to bridge the gap between experts if it's done in a reasonable manner. Taking precautionary steps to avoid similar situations is really necessary for future generations.
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