Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle this problem

In these tremendous urban areas,

overpopulation

has been the primary issue that still continuing and spreading.

This

essay will illustrate several triggers and will

also

elaborate

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solutions that help the national authorities and individuals in controlling

this

problem.

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with, there are two primary causes that create

overpopulation

.

Firstly

, lack of education in society, which results in free

sex

among underage

people

.

For example

, because of free

sex

in adolescents in Indonesia, the percentage of birth rate

was

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rose moderately in the

last

years.

Secondly

, the problem is happened owing to the wrong mindset and culture in society.

Hence

, there is a gradual rise in the birth rate. In Indonesia,

for example

, there is a culture to make a baby as many as possible to increase their prosperity. In

this

case, government and the public should take some actions to reduce

this

problematic issue. Creating laws related to

sex

and providing educators that

able

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to explain some adverse effects of

overpopulation

might be some

alternatife

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alternative

alternatives

to tackle

this

problem.

Moreover

,

people

are advised to improve their intelligence about

sex

education and follow the program which is handled by the health authorities to prevent

overpopulation

. To illustrate

this

, there is a program in Indonesia called family plan which makes

people

consume several supplements and use condoms, so

people

might contribute to

reduce

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birth

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rate.

To sum up

, after a thorough analysis

in

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subject, it is identified that

overpopulation

happened because of a lack of knowledge and a wrong mindset. I strongly opine

to tackle

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this

issue with the support of both government and the individual.