The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words

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The graph illustrates the quota of university graduates of each sex from 1992 to 2007 in Canada.

Overall

, both sexes had a similar trajectory of growth which has

as a result

more students graduating in 2007 when compared with the other years.

Therefore

, the vast majority of people that concluded their higher education degree are female in all the time periods presented.

Moreover

, both sexes' lines had a significant fluctuation that turned into a surge between 2001 and 2006.

Nevertheless

, the graph remained practically steady between 1997 and 2000.

Furthermore

, a slight rise and reduction could be observed in 1995 for both categories and in 2000 for the male students' chart.

Additionally

, in 1992 only a hundred thousand women graduated whilst in 2007 almost a hundred 50.000 completed their course,

hence

an increase of fifty thousand.

Whereas

men have shown an improvement of only twenty thousand in the same period. In conclusion, in Canada in the 15 years time frame given by the data, women seek more education than the opposite sex.

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