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A lot of people spend a major part of their adult life at work, so job satisfaction is very important for individual happiness. What are the main factors that contribute to job satisfaction? What are the possible solutions for people who are unsatisfied with their jobs?

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Many people spend their one-third life span at
work
, so happiness and passion in a job
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 very important. Unsatisfaction at
work
 leads them to a lot of stress and affects their mental health as well,
therefore
 it reflects in their life. Each day a normal person works 8 hours and 5 days per week, but some people are not that
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lucky they
work
 more than 8 hours and have a single day off in a week, If they are not satisfied it turned out to be a huge disaster.
A meaning
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 of
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 “good job”
vary
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 person to person and their choices,
according to
 a group of people they believe
office
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the office
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 environment is
most
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 important, but on the other ,hand some think that salary is valuable
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 them which makes them more comfortable in
workplace
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the workplace
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. In my
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 all of these factors are responsible to make your working hours more
joy
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 able like an office environment,
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 salary,
work load
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workload
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 and most important area of interest, even
you
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if you
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 are getting
a
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good pay and having a peaceful environment but if you are not enjoying you have to think about it.
Now
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 what if you are in a condition where you don't like your
work
? There are plenty of steps which can be taken in order to get
a
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desirable
work
. A first step would be trying to find the root cause in your current job and think if you can fix it, by doing
this
 you can figure out the problem which makes you uncomfortable and the possible solution, If things are not doable at least you know that you have to move on and find some other job which relates you.
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