The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

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The provided chart illustrates the top 10 countries in terms of producing and consuming electricity in 2014. Figures are measured in

billion

kWh

Overall

, China and the USA lead with significantly large figures,

while

the Republic of Korea is in

last

place. Generally, almost all the countries consumed power less than they produced. China and the United States generated electrical power of around 5400 and 4000

billion

kWh

respectively, which is around 4 to 5 times that of Russia.

Furthermore

, Japan consumed 856.7

billion

kWh

in 2014, which is less than the amount that India produced. Canada and France ranked 6th and 7th with figures of 618.9 and 561.2

billion

kWh

. Brazil, Germany and Korea roughly produced around 500

billion

kWh

in the year 2014.

However

, in Germany, electricity consumption is higher than its production with a gap of 50

billion

kWh

That is

larger than the production of Brazil and France.

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The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

Some people tend to buy products or get services instantly, without waiting. Why is it happening? Is this a positive or a negative development?

in some countries,more and more people are hiring a personal fitness trainer, rather than playing sports or doing exersice classses what are the reasons for this? is this a positive or negative development?

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