The charts below shows the percentage of people who ate five proportions of fruits and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008.
From 2001 to 2008, the bar graph depicts the percentage of men, women, and children who ate five portions of fruits and vegetables per day in the United Kingdom.
Women's consumption of fruits and vegetables as part of meals increased gradually from 23 per
cent
in 2001 to 35 per cent
in 2006. Moreover
, by 2008, it had dropped slightly to 30%.
For three years, children's diets remained stable, beginning at 13% in 2001 and gradually increasing to 26% by 2007. Despite the fact that by 2008, the proportion of their consumption had dropped to 24 per cent
.
Finally
, men were able to maintain a stable percentage of 17 per
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cent
beginning in 2001 for three years, gradually increasing to 27% by 2006. By 2008, they had limited their intake of fruits and vegetables to 26 per cent
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