The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and

2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and

the charts show how it was distributed.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and

make comparisons where relevant.
A glance at the line graph provided reveals the
number
of shops that closed and opened in one country from 2011 to 2018.
Overall
, it is evident that the
number
of
shop
openings
experienced a downward trend,
while
closures
almost remained the same in all
years
except in 2015. Regarding the
openings
, it was on the top in comparison to
closures
in 2014, accounting for approximately 8500 and 6400. After
then
, the
number
of
shop
openings
declined significantly by 4500 in 2012. In the next two
years
, the
shop
openings
experienced considerable growth, which accounted for nearly 6100 in 6400.
Following
this
, it decreased by about 2000 and remained the same between 2015 and 2017. The
shop
openings
slightly decreased in the latter year, making up 3000. Moving to the
closures
, it fluctuated at around 6200 and 7000 during the first 4
years
. In 2015, the
number
of
shop
closures
fell sharply from nearly 6000 to 500, after which it exponentially increased by 10 times in 2016. After that, the
number
of shops that closed was similar in the
last
3
years
, at around 5000.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, shop, openings, closures, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fiscal allocations
  • Revenue streams
  • Budgetary oversight
  • Expenditure
  • Financial appropriation
  • Government grants
  • Local taxation
  • Operational costs
  • Capital investment
  • Public safety
  • Crime prevention
  • Community policing
  • Resource allocation
  • Year-on-year comparison
  • Budgetary constraints
  • Fiscal year
  • Fund disbursement
  • Budget deficit/surplus
  • Trend analysis
  • Financial sustainability
  • Law enforcement funding
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