You are a student who wants to apply to the Green Pines College. You are experiencing financial problems at the moment. Write a letter to the Principal of the College explaining your situation and ask for information on scholarships or other means of financial help available. Dear Sir/Madam,

#student #pines #college #moment #situation #information #scholarships #sir #madam

Dear sir/madam , I am writing

this

letter to let you know about the financial struggle that I face at the moment.I hope you are in a position to help me in

this

regard . My name is Arun Prakash and I completed secondary school

last

year and looking for higher study at Green pines college.My favourite subject is visual media communication. Unfortunately, my financial background does not allow me to continue with the application. I would really appreciate it if you could help me with some scholarship or any other financial support .I am very good at studies and secured 99% at the secondary level.I have included my address and a reference from my previous teacher for your consideration. I would like to let you know that I am available for a one-on-one interaction if needed.Thank you for reading

this

letter and I expect a positive reply from you Yours sincerely

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