The graph shows the population of turtles in India from 1980 to 2012
The line graph depicts the
population
of several turtle species
in India from 1980 to 2012. Despite the fact that just a few hundred turtles
remained in India.
In general, all turtle species
were at 100 in 1980, but by 2012, Olive Ridley turtles
had increased their numbers and remained at the top. Leatherback turtles
, on the other hand
, came in last
.
That was evident to me; the number of progeny of leatherback turtles
grew starting in 1980 and stayed at 135 by 1997. After then
, it managed to stay around 125 through several ups and downs until 2012. Green turtles
have been facing population
declines since the early 1980s. Furthermore
, their population
fluctuated and stayed at 85 in 2012. Furthermore
, leatherback turtles
were going extinct at a quicker rate than other species
; their number started to drop one by one and had reached 19 by 2012.
Finally
, the surviving species
were able to consistently regulate their population
, with occasional ups and downs from the 1980s until 2012.Submitted by imjashu66 on
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