The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparision where required
The graph is a statistical representation of the variability in the number of
shops
opening and getting closed from the year
2011 to 2018 in one country
Overall
, both the types have a fluctuation in the graph throughout the period, yet it is visible that the opening of the shop has some stability in between, but the closure part is changing constantly
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the Number of Add a comma
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shops
which leads to closure in the
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year
2011, was around 6,200 and declined to approximately 5,900 in the year
2012. It outraced between the year
2012-2013 and again downrated in 2014. Between the years 2014-2015
it gradually declined and went to almost 800, and rapidly increased between 2015-2016 which was around 5100, again decreased slightly and came to 5000 and increased by approximately 5200 between 2017-2018
Eventually, when we focus on the number of Add a comma
,2015
shops
opened, from 2011 to 2012 it declined by almost 8500 to somewhere around 3900, then
it constantly increased between 2012-2014 by 5000 to approximately 6100. It decreased by 200 between 2014-2015 and hereafter it remained constant between 2015-2016 and slightly outraced by 100 shops
and finally
decreased between 2017 to 2018.Submitted by infojmvisaservices on
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