You recently attended a meeting at e hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter • Say where you think you left the papers • Explain why they are so important • Tell the manager what you want him/her to do

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Dear Sir or Madam I am writing

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letter to bring your notice that yesterday I had a meeting in your hotel lobby area and When I returned to my home, suddenly I realized that I left a number of my extremely essential

documents

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there. Here is some information that you have to know. These

documents

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are extremely critical to me.

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I had a meeting to open my own new store in my nearby home location so those were my new outlet lease

documents

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, which have to

keep

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safe for a longer time.

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, there has an

another vital

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another vital document

other vital documents

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documents

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. The importance of those

documents

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due

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to the fact there is a bunch of confidential information mentioned

the

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by the

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company.

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, If it

will be

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lost

may be

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maybe

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, I will

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lose my

favorite

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job as well.

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importantly, kindly ask your all stuff about it,

you

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if you

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find those papers please call me back on my phone number which I am mentioning at the end of

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letter. I will come back and take it. I am hoping for a good response as soon as possible from you. Yours faithfully Pokiza

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coherence cohesion

Work on sentence structure and clarity to avoid run-on sentences and ensure information is easily understandable.

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Make sure to use more formal expressions and check for minor grammatical errors to improve the overall tone.

task achievement

You addressed all the required points clearly and included necessary information.

coherence cohesion

Your letter is structured well with a clear beginning, middle, and end.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

192 words

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