You recently attended a meeting at e hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter • Say where you think you left the papers • Explain why they are so important • Tell the manager what you want him/her to do

Dear Sir or Madam I am writing
this
letter to bring your notice that yesterday I had a meeting in your hotel lobby area and When I returned to my home, suddenly I realized that I left a number of my extremely essential
documents
there. Here is some information that you have to know. These
documents
are extremely critical to me.
As
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I had a meeting to open my own new store in my nearby home location so those were my new outlet lease
documents
, which have to
keep
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safe for a longer time.
Furthermore
, there has an
another vital
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another vital document
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documents
. The importance of those
documents
due
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to the fact there is a bunch of confidential information mentioned
the
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company.
However
, If it
will be
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lost
may be
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maybe
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, I will
also
lose my
favorite
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job as well.
The most
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importantly, kindly ask your all stuff about it,
you
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if you
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find those papers please call me back on my phone number which I am mentioning at the end of
this
letter. I will come back and take it. I am hoping for a good response as soon as possible from you. Yours faithfully Pokiza
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coherence cohesion
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