You recently attended a meeting at e hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter • Say where you think you left the papers • Explain why they are so important • Tell the manager what you want him/her to do

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Dear Sir or Madam I am writing

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letter to bring your notice that yesterday I had a meeting in your hotel lobby area and When I returned to my home, suddenly I realized that I left a number of my extremely essential

documents

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there. Here is some information that you have to know. These

documents

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are extremely critical to me.

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I had a meeting to open my own new store in my nearby home location so those were my new outlet lease

documents

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, which have to

keep

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safe for a longer time.

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, there has an

another vital

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another vital document

other vital documents

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documents

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. The importance of those

documents

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due

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to the fact there is a bunch of confidential information mentioned

the

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by the

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company.

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, If it

will be

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lost

may be

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maybe

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, I will

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lose my

favorite

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job as well.

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importantly, kindly ask your all stuff about it,

you

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if you

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find those papers please call me back on my phone number which I am mentioning at the end of

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letter. I will come back and take it. I am hoping for a good response as soon as possible from you. Yours faithfully Pokiza

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Work on sentence structure and clarity to avoid run-on sentences and ensure information is easily understandable.

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task achievement

You addressed all the required points clearly and included necessary information.

coherence cohesion

Your letter is structured well with a clear beginning, middle, and end.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

192 words

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