The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates alterations in the population of Australian-born and non-Australian-born
people
who reside in cities, towns and urban areas
from 1995 to 2010.
Overall
, the percentage of individuals who reside in urban areas
increased dramatically. On the contrary
, more and more people
choose to live outside the rural areas
during a given time period.
In 1995, the percentage of people
who were born in Australia and lived in the cities was about 50% and that number rose to 65% in 2010. The data for the non-Australian population moved up 20%, from 60% in 1995 to 80% 15 years later. Compared with figures for rural residents both Australians and non-Australians plummeted sharply, where numbers decreased from 30% to 15% for Australian
and from 40% to nearly 5% for foreigners.
Correct your spelling
Australians
On the other hand
, the number of people
born in villages has decreased by at least 5% in all categories at the given time period. Even though, this
change is relatively tiny when it is
compared to the decline Verb problem
apply
of
Change preposition
in
percentage
of birth in rural Add an article
the percentage
areas
. The birth rate of rural area
in Fix the agreement mistake
areas
people
born in Australia and outside Australia fallen
from 30 and 40 % to 15 and 5% respectively which was Wrong verb form
fell
the
noteworthy alteration among the other statistics.Correct article usage
a
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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