Many parents are worried about the increasing amount of violence in computer games and TV programmers for children. Is violent entertainment harmful for children? What can be done to solve this problem?

It is often argued that

computer

games

and

TV

shows affect badly

to

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children

and they cause

incerasing

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increasing

increasingly

violent

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. There are reasons contributing to

this

phenomenon.

However

, there are some possible solutions to

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which I will discuss in

this

essay.

To begin

with, the first

damage

is that

children

can not

separete

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separate

real and

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lives.

In other words

,

children

who play

game

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games

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and watch

TV

series so much,

they

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migh

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might

be confuse

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and may apply their real life.

For instance

, a

computer

games

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that

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is called Blue Whales. It was very popular among the

chindren

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children

5 years ago. Some

of

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teens

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the teens

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who play the

game

wanted to die their life.

Moreover

, The second harm is that it may lead to

give

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damage

children

's environment. Namely, a child who is under

effect

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violence

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series

migh

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might

apply their real life and can give

damage

their friends and brothers.

According to

many researchers, many crimes

based

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on

computer

games

and

TV

shows.

Hence

, it is

a

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clear that

this

activity is very harmful

for

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society.

Nevertheless

, there are several possible solutions to

this

problem.

Firstly

, families should limit to use

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computer

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computers

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for

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their

children

.

Secondly

,

also

parents ought to find different activities to play with together their

children

. What is more, governments are

also

responsible to build

game

facilities to overcome

this

issue.

For example

,

according to

many studies, as possible as control the playing

game

,

it

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would be

benefical

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beneficial

for

population

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.

Therefore

, I consider that these are

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useful

way

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to tackle

this

problem. In conclusion, even though

computer

games

and

TV

programmes are very harmful

for

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children

due to

can not

seperate

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separate

real and

function

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functional

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lives, and leading to give

damage

their environment, the suggested solutions which are limiting to use

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a computer

the computer

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computer

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, finding other activities and building different facilities for playing. If we do not apply these notions, there will be bad consequences for humanity.