The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute infromation on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts
The given figure illustrates the process of collecting
information
on the weather to make a comprehensive forecast conducted by the Australian Meteorology Bureau in one minute. The diagram starts with incoming information
and informs the data
results as the last
step.
To begin
with, there are three facilities to collect wheater data
; satellite, radar and drifting buoy. Scientists analyze and forecast the information
taken from a satellite in space as well as
the data
coming from the radar shows a radar screen which provides weather conditions in particular
areas of the world. In addition
, the bureau collects up-to-the-minute synoptic charts from a drafting buoy which is located in the sea. After all the information
is complete, The data
is inputted into a computer to prepare the broadcast and subsequently
, reliable forecasts are published in many media, including TV newsreaders, radio, and recorded information
.
In conclusion, What the bureau do is that people can know the weather condition such
as rain, snow, temperature, etc from a believable institution.Submitted by febriantyhasanah on
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