It is common nowadays for shops to have their own value in the market and
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can purchase everything from there. Some individuals believe that stores shouldn't be permitted to sell eating things that have been certified harmful to
people
's health,
while
others
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this
idea. In my opinion, I partially agree with the former statements as some reasons I will discuss below.
To begin
, it is well-known that eating foods with little nutritional value and high levels of harmful ingredients can have negative effects on the body over time.
Additionally
, consuming unhealthy foods and drinks can lead to the development of obesity and diabetes
as well as
chronic diseases like cancer. Take instant
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as an example, numerous research
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the toxicity of instant noodles, with additives
such
as
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, salt, saturated fat, etc., proving that eating instant noodles for a long time is easy to cause cancer.
Likewise
, it impairs immunity since these meals are lacking
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and
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in harmful ingredients,
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a result of
this
, limiting the body of necessary nutrients.
One thing which is
important is that prohibiting the use of harmful eating things can result in saving the government spending on
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wellness issues.
Furthermore
, If the government does not allow stores from selling junk
food
, public awareness will
also
increase significantly. Clients and producers will both feel the potential harm that
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may bring.
Therefore
,
people
become increasingly conscious of the quality of products in different fields.
For instance
,
people
in Japan concern about what to consume
due to
the early simple
food
instructions in Japanese schools. So, if
people
can manage their eating, they will be more attentive.
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the
food
tastes, it is important for shops to stop providing meals and drinks that impact
people
's health badly.
People
's health will remain in good shape
as a result
of
this
, as well.
Moreover
, by encouraging individuals to manage their meals, public awareness will
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among communities.