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Take a look at the graphics and complete the task. The table and chart show data about reading among people under 30 years old. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Take a look at the graphics and complete the task. The table and chart show data about reading among people under 30 years old. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
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The given bar chart compares the type of
books
 (
audio
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audiobook
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book
, e-
book
, and print
book
) read by 3 different
ages
,
while
 the table chart provides information about the percentage and average of
reading
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the reading
a reading
show examples
book
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books
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 by each
ages
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age
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 group in 2012. A glance at the graphs shows that
print
Correct article usage
the print
show examples
book
 was the most popular
book
 and the most teenagers who were
attractive
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attracted
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 to
read
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reading
show examples
 was the range age of 16-17.
According to
 the data, It can be vividly seen that all
ages
 tended to read
print
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a print
the print
show examples
book
Fix the agreement mistake
books
show examples
instead
. interestingly, the age of 16-17 was nearly 90% using
printed
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the printed
a printed
show examples
book
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books
show examples
 and the other
ages
 group show slightly similar proportion, just above 70%. the two others,
audio
Correct your spelling
audiobook
show examples
book
 and e-
book
, were less popular where they had similar patter for 3
ages
 group, contributing merely between just above 10% and 21%.
On the other hand
, 90% of teenagers who were 16-17 years old read
books
 with 12 average number of
books
. Followed by the 18-24 and 25-29 years old read 11
books
in
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on
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 average
as well as
 79% and 81%
Change preposition
of
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youngsters
reading
Wrong verb form
read
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books
in
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at
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 both
ages
, respectively.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words books, book, ages with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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