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Take a look at the graphics and complete the task. The table and chart show data about reading among people under 30 years old. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Take a look at the graphics and complete the task. The table and chart show data about reading among people under 30 years old. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given bar chart compares the type of
books
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 (
audio
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audiobook
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book
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, e-
book
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, and print
book
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) read by 3 different
ages
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,
while
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 the table chart provides information about the percentage and average of
reading
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the reading
a reading
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book
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books
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 by each
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ages
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age
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 group in 2012. A glance at the graphs shows that
print
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the print
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book
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 was the most popular
book
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 and the most teenagers who were
attractive
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attracted
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 to
read
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reading
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 was the range age of 16-17.
According to
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 the data, It can be vividly seen that all
ages
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 tended to read
print
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a print
the print
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book
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books
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instead
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. interestingly, the age of 16-17 was nearly 90% using
printed
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the printed
a printed
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book
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books
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 and the other
ages
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 group show slightly similar proportion, just above 70%. the two others,
audio
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audiobook
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book
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 and e-
book
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, were less popular where they had similar patter for 3
ages
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 group, contributing merely between just above 10% and 21%.
On the other hand
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, 90% of teenagers who were 16-17 years old read
books
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 with 12 average number of
books
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. Followed by the 18-24 and 25-29 years old read 11
books
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in
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on
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 average
as well as
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 79% and 81%
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of
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youngsters
reading
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read
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books
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in
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at
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 both
ages
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, respectively.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words books, book, ages with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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