The bar graph shows the global sales (in billions of dollars) of different types of digital games between 2000 and 2006. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The bar graph shows the global sales (in billions of dollars) of different types of digital games between 2000 and 2006.

Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The bar chart illustrates the universal sales rate of various virtual
games
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(Mobile phone
games
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, online
games
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, console
games
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, and handheld
games
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) from the
year
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2000 to 2006.
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, it is visible that console
games
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have decreased over the years and the rest all the categories have increased every
year
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.
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,with the comparison between the surplus and the deficit of the given categories, handled
games
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, online
games
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and mobile phone
games
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have outraced by a certain percentage every
year
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, only console
games
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have down-raced. People start playing mobile
games
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in the
year
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2002, as prior to that they were no cell phones available with
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it increased gradually every
year
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and reached up to 8
billion
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$. Online
games
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were introduced in the
year
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2001, and same as mobile phone
games
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, online
games
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also
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boost every
year
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and almost crossed 8
billion
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$. Above of all handheld game stands different in the whole chart and kept on increasing each
year
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and reached 17
billion
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$ approximately
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, Console
games
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went to decreasing from about 5
billion
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$ in the
year
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2000 to somewhere around 2
billion
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$ in the
year
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2006.
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Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
Vocabulary: Replace the words games, year, billion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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