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Bullying is a big problem in many schools. What are the causes? What are the solutions?

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a common issue which may seem not so hazardous since they are not those who are mocked.
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 students' health and leave
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 entire life. I am a strong advocate of the opinion that the fundamental responsibility of the
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it and the resolving ways.
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 of the matures
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teachers
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society. If older individuals reveal their negative opinion about someone,
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Children
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another student and bully him or her. Immatures' own feelings influence
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the mockery process
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agression
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aggression
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a knock-on effect on
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children
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 disposed to them,
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bullers'
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bullets
 not coping with an insult. Summarizing all the facts, I would say that adults must pay more attention
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other students
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their emotional health and
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bullying. If
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 cases amount will be increased.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Bullying
  • Harassment
  • Intimidation
  • Diversity
  • Adolescent
  • Mimic
  • Aggressive behavior
  • Cyberbullying
  • Peer pressure
  • Social acceptance
  • Awareness
  • Conflict resolution
  • Peer mediation
  • Consequences
  • Respect
  • Kindness
  • Open communication
  • Vulnerable
  • Buddy system
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