The two below chart illustrate the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation between 1918 and 2011 in both England and Wales
The two below
chart
illustrate the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation between 1918 and 2011 in both England and Wales. Fix the agreement mistake
charts
Overall
, the proportions have varied over the years between the rental and owned houses.
From the chart
we can infer that Add a comma
,chart
highest
owned accommodation was in 1918 by approximately 80%. Correct article usage
the highest
This
valued
fluctuated over the years to reach Replace the word
value
to
near around 30% in 2001 before it raised above 35% in 2011.
Change preposition
apply
On the other hand
, the proportions of the
rented houses started at Correct article usage
apply
lowest
level in 1918 Add an article
the lowest
by
higher than 20% and gradually increased over the years to reach a peak in 2001 Change preposition
apply
by
approximately 70%
It is worth Change preposition
of
to mention
that the two values were equal in 1971 by 50%, and Change the verb form
mentioning
this
was the only time that both values has the same percentage.
In a summary, we can note significantly that the
most people tend to rent the accommodation rather than buy and own it.Correct article usage
apply
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