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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as prctical problems, to what extent do you agree or disgree with this statement?

#country #language #disgree
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several challenges for any
person
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 who is willing to live in a foreign
country
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. One of those challenges is the
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 barrier, in my opinion, if anyone ignores learning the
language
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 of the
country
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 he is living in, he will face many problems in both practical and social situations. Some people believe that it is not necessary to speak or learn the
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 of the
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work or live in, they claim that using an intermediate
language
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 like English or using a social app translator can finalize and solve basic life situations.
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, there are several opinions against what has
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 above. Any
person
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 can face multiple issues in case of ignorance
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 the
language
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 of the
country
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 he transfers to. Maybe
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 he cannot be able to buy his daily needs as he cannot speak or express what he needs,
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 learning a
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 will enable any
person
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 to understand the customs and traditions of the
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 he is living in. In many countries you can’t get the nationality or even bring your family if you are not able to speak the native
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country
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,
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 in Germany they request a B1 level to get the nationality after spending at least 5 working years in the
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.
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, to deal with governmental sectors you should be able to speak and express your request in a clear
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 so you avoid any practical issue that might be happened
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 any wrong expression. To sum it up, learning a foreign
language
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 is not easy but it will release and remove a heavy burden from the
person
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 who is willing to live in a different community.
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