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life has a several choices comparing to the past, as world today has become one country and almost speaks one Language called a technology language

#life #choices #world #country #language #technology
Today’s
life
 has
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several choices
comparing
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 to the past, as
world
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 today has become one country and almost speaks one Language called a technology language,
life
 became much easier and faster with
a
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several options and facilities, in
this
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the
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life
 today with the previous centuries we can easily find huge improvements in all fields and sectors,
for example
 in the field of agriculture we can clearly see the huge advanced progress in all ways of workforce, harvests, soils and seeds, the corps productions
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 dramatically increased
due to
 the usage of the recent technology. When it comes to the industry field, we can notice that the number of
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 has decreased
due to
 the involvement of the new robots
instead
 of labours and engineers, using the latest smart machines has
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 the time and
efforts
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 which were spent in the pastime.
Nevertheless
, the benefits of instant communications
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 provided the advantage of solving
the
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issue in a short and fast time,
that
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 reflects on
people
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life
 and
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 them to finalize and focus on other tasks.
For instance
, today the process of ordering or cancelling the purchased products will require one to two minutes
comparing
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 to weeks and days in previous decades. In conclusion, in my opinion, I believe that the choices of
life
 nowadays are multiple and have enormous positive impacts
in
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 our daily tasks in both
short
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 and long term.
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