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Multinational companies provides numerous benefits to the people globally. Do you agree or disagree.

#companies #people
It is quite common these days that a significant
number
 of employees of a country work for multinational
companies
.
This
 trend can bring a lot of profits for the residents of these countries.I agree to some extent and in
this
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 I will discuss
about
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benefits of these
companies
 and give reasons. On the one hand,
this
 trend has a substantial impact on economic growth, since these
companies
 can hire a large
number
 of employees from where they are based, so they can prevent unemployment throughout the country and help impoverished
people
, so they can boost the affordability of
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people
.
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 the vast majority of workers of a well-known technology company in my area are local workers.
On the other hand
, international workers have many advantages to multinational
companies
 as well. The shares of the company can have a dramatic increase in
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 market.In
this
way
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 the company can reach a reputation and have more excellence than its competitors.
In addition
, it has a cultural significance, since numerous
people
 with diverse cultures are working together all over the world and it can introduce different cultures to employees,
therefore
 they can learn a various
number
 of facts about
people
 living far away from them. Having weighed up all the arguments, I'm convinced that multinational
companies
 have a large
number
 of interests
to
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the
people
 globally, because of the influence that they have on the economy and culture. In fact, I hold the view that the governments should plan to found more multinational
companies
.
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