The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
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maps
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map
depicts
the street access to the city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.It Change the verb form
depict
clear
from the maps that there was a huge improvement Add a missing verb
is clear
for
the facilities of the hospital in 2010.
Change preposition
in
According to
what is shown,in 2010 they took advantage of the empty plot Linking Words
in
the western side of the hospital and transformed it Change preposition
on
to
a bus station.As can be Change preposition
into
seen
there Add a comma
,seen
was
Correct subject-verb agreement
were
tow
roundabouts located Correct your spelling
two
in
the hospital road and one placed Change preposition
on
in
the eastern side in order to give Change preposition
on
a
quick access Remove the article
apply
for
the building.
Change preposition
to
On the other hand
,they extended the parking spaces so in 2010 there Linking Words
was
specific car Change the verb form
were
parkings
for the staff Correct your spelling
parking
as well as
the public car Linking Words
parkings
located on the eastern side of the city hospital.
Correct your spelling
parks
To sum up
,it is clear from the maps that there Linking Words
was
numerous differences between the Change the verb form
were
tow
years in terms of the development of facilities and services.Correct your spelling
two
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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