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The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
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 chart gives information on the
percentage
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 of
households
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 in owned and rented accommodations in two different countries in England
as well as
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 Wales between 1918 and 2011.
According to
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 what is shown, the
percentage
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 of
households
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 in rented
accommodation
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 reached a peak
approximately
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 around 77%in 1918.
The
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 following two decades the ratio of
households
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 in both sorts of
accommodation
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 remained
steadily
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 at
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percentage
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the percentage
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 of nearly 31%for the owned
accommodation
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 and nearly 68%for the rented
accommodations
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accommodation
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In addition
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,in 1971 the
percentage
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 of
households
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 in both types of
accommodation
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 remained stable at 50%.The ratio of
households
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 in owned
accommodation
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 reached the least point around 22%in 1918.
To sum up
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,The
percentage
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 of
households
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 in owned and rented
accommodation
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 remained
steadily
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 in 1939,1953 and 1971.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, households, accommodation with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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