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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

#people #situation #job #shortage #money #situations
Almost everyone
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 some point
of
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 their
life
 will find
herself
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 in a difficult
situation
.
Then
 it is up to the person, how she reacts. Someone prefers to acknowledge the
sittuation
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situation
 and carry on,
while
 others might take the action into their hands and seek
soultions
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solutions
. In
this
 essay, I will argue that accepting the
situation
 as it is might be safer,
however
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 reacting the
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unfavourable
situation
 by taking action is likely
yield
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 better results and offer peace in the
long-term
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long term
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. Not accepting a difficult period in
life
 can lead to
a
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 optimal solution and better
life
 in the
long-term
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. By realizing the current
situation
 and attempting to solve a difficult circumstance, it is possible to find a
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 solution. The way of not giving up can provide a peaceful mind in later
life
 when you reflect on the
situation
 and realise that if you had not applied for that dream job, you would not
had
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such
 a happy
life
. What is more, even if the attempt is
unsucccessful
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unsuccessful
, the fact that you at least tried and
steped
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stepped
 out of your comfort zone can bring peace, when you later reflect on your
life
.
On the other hand
, quickly
accept
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 a bad
situation
 and
refocus
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 on other problems can be optimal. Sometimes, no matter how hard you try, it is simply not possible to
achive
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achieve
desired
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 solution.
Furthemore
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Furthermore
, if one finds himself later in
life
 in a dull position, it might be too risky to change employment as in
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 of job, she will no longer have the experience and
thus
 would earn
lower
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 salary. What is more, if other people are dependent on the person
such
 as family, it is not ideal.
Hence
 it should be better to
supress
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suppress
 individual needs and simply accept the bad
situation
. In conclusion, I firmly believe that one should tackle bad circumstances. Not only that it can result in a better
life
situation
, but
also
 lead to a happier
life
.
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  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
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  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
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