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Many countries now have people from different cultures and ethnic groups. What is the reason for this? Is it a positive or negative development?

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Nowadays, a large proportion of countries around the world have many crowds from various cultures and ethnic groups. Personally, I firmly believe that
this
 phenomenon is caused by one
reason
 and is a positive
development
.
To begin
 with, it is obvious that globalization is the main
reason
 why many
nations
 consist of
people
 who have different cultural backgrounds. With the
development
 of technology and transportation, the public are able to access information from other countries which makes the public intend to travel to those
nations
 immediately. Take, America,
for example
. There is no doubt that a variety of
people
 who have different customs gather in America since those who hear of living in the USA and travel there by cheap and convenient at a young age.
Consequently
, globalization which results from advanced technology and transportation is the major
reason
 why many
people
 who have different cultural backgrounds gather in the same
nations
. Meanwhile,
this
 phenomenon has a positive impact on
development
 because
this
 help
people
 from different customs understand each other. If the public only receives information via the Internet
instead
 of interacting with
people
 from different face to face, they might be misled by false news and misunderstandings.
For instance
, in Taiwan, several years ago,
due to
 terrorist attacks overseas, the Taiwanese thought Muslims are dangerous and unkind.
Nevertheless
, recently, many Muslim workers come to Taiwan and given the Taiwanese an opportunity to communicate with them and address the cultural problems. In conclusion, when
people
 from different customs have a chance to live together, they are able to understand each other and will not be misled by false news. To summarize, as far as I am concerned, I strongly state that globalization is the major
reason
 why many
nations
 consist of multiple cultures. Meanwhile, I think that
this
 situation affects
development
 in a positive way
due to
 the fact that
this
 is the opportunity to interact with other cultures and receive the right information.
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