There have been many inventions in human history, such as the wheel. Some people think the most important invention is the Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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human
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to evolve with
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time
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such
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.A fraction of individuals
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that
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is the most meaningful innovative thing made by humans.I completely disagree with
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notions.In the forthcoming
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i
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have
elobareted
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elaborated
such
reasons regarding
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issue. The first and foremost reason is several inventions
such
as
telephone
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,wheels,cars,
computer
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, and the satellite are the most meaningful for humankind.To
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this
, telephones made life so much easy that nowadays every individual uses
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to keep in touch with
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via calling.
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also
made
ease
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for the business to do more complex work in just
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of minutes.
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decades ago working without
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technological advancements was so much hard for the people of that era.
Furthermore
,
internet
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is helpful for
the
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individuals but it has some limited uses.To explain
this
,
internet
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is helpful to book a taxi for a passenger but it can not drive a person to the desired destination.
Also
internet
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is helpful to search
details
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about
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remedies
but it does not cure any patient.
To conclude
,Thre are
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plethora
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of significant innovation
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suchas
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such as
telephone
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the telephone
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helps s person to connect with
other person
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another person
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, car
provide
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transportation
of
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individuals from one place to another.
like wise
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internet
is helpful to search
anything
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for anything
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from
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the
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website but it is not necessary
that
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internet
can
used
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as other inventions.
That is
why
internet
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is not the most important innovation.
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