the graph below shows the amount of goods transported in the UK from 1974 to 2002
The given line graphs delineate the static of goods which were transported in the UK between 1974 to 2002.
about 58
Overall
, despite some Linking Words
fluctations
, the indicators of all groups increased dramatically during Correct your spelling
fluctuations
this
period.
In 1974, the percentages for water and rail stood at approximately the same, respectively 40 Linking Words
mln
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tonnes
and 38 Use synonyms
mln
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tonnes
. In spite Use synonyms
of
, some vacillations were observed in the result of rail from 1978 to 1994, all in all, the indicators of rail Correct pronoun usage
thisof
were
soared around 42 Unnecessary verb
apply
mln
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tonnes
. In 1978, the amount of water Use synonyms
was surged
Change to the active voice
surged
Change preposition
by
mln
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moreover
, the result Linking Words
was
plateaued from 1982 to 1994. Despite Unnecessary verb
apply
of
Change preposition
apply
a
number of water Correct article usage
the
plunged
in 1998, opposed to, the indicator Wrong verb form
plunging
was
skyrocketed.
Unnecessary verb
apply
On the other hand
, the Linking Words
amoung
of the road was Correct your spelling
amount
apex
, Add an article
the apex
in contrast
, the indicator of the pipeline was Linking Words
nadir
. Add an article
the nadir
Furthermore
, the Linking Words
quantity
of roads Change the quantifier
number
as well as
the number of Linking Words
pipeline
oscillated, in conclusion, the pointer of roads rose steadily so an upward trend in the total of roads was visible from 1994 to 2002 roughly 98 Change to a plural noun
pipelines
mln
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tonnes
, Use synonyms
however
, the amount of the pipeline was plateaued around 22 Linking Words
mln
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tonnes
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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