Computer games are becoming very popular among children of all ages and nationalities. Parents say they are concerned because these games have little educational value and many harmful effects. Do you agree or disagree?
These days there's a debate over the issue of video
games
among students of different ages in every nation. Some caretakers argue that the benefits are more than the drawbacks, Use synonyms
while
others say that the disadvantages overshadow the advantages. Both sides have reasonable reasons but Linking Words
this
essay will completely agree with the latter statement and discuss the views in the body below.
First of all, one of the reasons why computer Linking Words
games
have a lot of demerits in children is that kids become addicted to them and forget about other responsibilities. Use synonyms
That is
to say, if a child starts to play Linking Words
games
in the morning, she enjoys them too much and doesn't wish to stop playing until one of the parents tells her to stop. Use synonyms
This
not only wastes their time doing other things but Linking Words
also
becomes addicted to them. Linking Words
For example
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according to
research done at Makerere University by professor John, it shows that 70 % of children become addicted to video Linking Words
games
and Use synonyms
this
scares a parent.
Addition to why a caretaker gets worried when his kid is playing an online game because it interferes with his studies during school period. Linking Words
In other words
, when his taken to school to study, he spends most of his time enjoying the game, especially during the lecture time when the lesson is boring. Linking Words
This
makes him lose concentration in class Linking Words
hence
leading to poor performance. Linking Words
For instance
, a high number of pupils fail exams Linking Words
due to
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games
that they play during class periods which makes them miss out on important information.
In conclusion, Use synonyms
therefore
I completely agree that online Linking Words
games
have more demerits than merits among learners of all age groups in different countries Use synonyms
due to
addictions that they cause and poor performance on campus.Linking Words
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