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Life cycle of a silk worm and production of silk cloth

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The diagram depicts the life cycle of a silkworm and the stages that occur to produce
silk
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cloth
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, the life cycle of a silkworm has 4 steps and takes about 10 weeks. The first step begins with the laying of eggs by an adult moth onto the mulberry leaf which
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 hatches after 10 days into larvae and
feed
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 on the mulberry leaves.
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4 to 6 weeks later the larvae start to give
silk
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 thread that they use to wrap themselves into. 3-6days later, a
coccon
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cocoon
 is formed which completely envelopes the larvae. The final step is when the adult moth comes out of the
coccon
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cocoon
 and the cycle continues. The production of
silk
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cloth
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 has six steps. The first of which is the selection of the
coccon
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cocoon
 which is boiled in water.
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 the boiled
caccon
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bacon
cacoon
 is unwinded to get threads of about 300-900mm
of
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 length which
are
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 twisted into longer and thicker threads. They are
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 woven to produce
silk
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cloth
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. The dying stage can either take place on the threads or the
cloth
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