You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter, describe what you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you've done since the course suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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feedback in regard to the cookery

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I took at your institution a couple of weeks ago. First of all, let me share with you how much I enjoyed the

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, it really helped me to improve the skills that I already have.

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I would let you know that the Thai segment, in which we realized the

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assessment, was out of

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world. Since I have finished the

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I do not do another thing but cook for all my friends and family, they are amazed

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everything I have learnt. Because of that, they are waiting for me to enrol in another program

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your school

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as French patisserie.

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with my feedback and

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not make it long, I would love to make a suggestion and ask you to add to your schedule a Latin American food

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. Since I am from Argentina, I would really appreciate having the chance of helping you if needed. Thank you so much for your time

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and I hope that my opinions would help your school in a positive way. Yours faithfully, Nicolas Arratta