The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.
According to
the table and charts, which represent the evaluation range of the police budget, between the period 2017-2018. In addition
to how the money
is spent, including three mean sources
.
Essentially, in 2017 the total reached 304.7 million. Overall
the national government had to take the most budget compared with the other sources
. Local taxes ranked two with 91.2 and the rest for other sources
such
as grants. Becomes the year 2018, the total increased to 318.6 m. As well as
in 2017 National governments had a significant budget of 177.8 m. Furthermore
, local taxes with 102.3 and other sources
with 38.5 has sparingly rated raise. Otherwise
, the money
was spent three-quarters percentage for salaries in 2017. Also
, in 2018 salaries were remarkably recorded.
To summarize, the national government had the highest total in the two years. Besides
how the money
has been spent the salaries is the higher per cent. Buildings and transport had the same rate of spending money
. Technology was the less disbursement.Submitted by Zainab Albahlool on
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