The diagrams below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton.
According to
the pie and table chart, which illustrates to us, the percentage of family spending bear week in one country. During the period From 1968 to 2018. The Linking Words
rate
of eight essential needs and requirements.
Essentially, the remarkable Use synonyms
rate
of an element Use synonyms
that is
the most valuable is Linking Words
food
. Use synonyms
Food
average upsurges by years, in1968 Use synonyms
food
had approximately taken 18%, and in 2018 it became 35% from weekly spending. Use synonyms
Second,
housing in 1968 had taken 10%, and in 2018 it rose to almost 20%. The third needed their leisure, which increased over the years from 8% in 1968 reached to 22% in 2018. Forth, transport with 7% in 1968 to 14% in 2018, double the range. Linking Words
On the other hand
, (fuel and power, clothing and footwear, household Linking Words
goods
, and personal Use synonyms
goods
) had no significant change in Use synonyms
rate
.
To summarize, the eighth element had three separate splits (move upward-immutable-decline). (Use synonyms
Food
, housing, transport, leisure) had a noticeable Use synonyms
rate
grown, moving upward. Household Use synonyms
goods
had convergent no alter, immutable. Three, fuel and power and personal Use synonyms
goods
and clothing and footwear had plummeted Use synonyms
rate
, decline.Use synonyms
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