The pie charts shows the spending habits of people in the UK in 1971 and 2001. Summarize the information by slelcting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The pie charts shows the spending habits of people in the UK in 1971 and 2001.

Summarize the information by slelcting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 

Write at least 150 words.
The pie chart describes how the UK citizens spent on their habits in the years 1971 and 2001
Overall
, when we compare both the year, the least preferred habit of the population
are
Correct subject-verb agreement
is
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purchasing books, and mostly spending on food.
To begin
,with categories which were down raced, 6% of the community
use
Replace the word
used
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to spend on books in 1971, which decreased by 5% in 2001. Furniture was purchased by 9% in 1971, which significantly decreased by 1%. The use of petrol in the year 1971 was 10% which slightly declined by 2% in 2011. The communities enjoyed the most having food at 44%, but it is drastically decreasing by 30% in 2001
While
discussing the expenditure which outraced when compared both the year, only 2% of crowd used the computers in 1971, which increased by 10% in 2001. family visiting restaurants in 1971
was
Change the verb form
were
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7% which exactly doubled in 2001. 22% of the public preferred cars which increased by 43% in 2001.
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Vocabulary: The word "compare" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.

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