It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Taking

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is one of the most tricky and uncomfortable

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subject

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in our lives. There are some opinions that strongly insist accepting

risks

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bring

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a lot of benefits after going through it like me, but there are

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negative opinions that absorbing

risks

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influences

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mentality

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the mentality

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in a bad way. I will

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focus on the

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of the issue and explain some disadvantages based on my own perspective and experiences.

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we can get valuable lessons from

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risks

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.

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,

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missed the deadline

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my scholarship before and it brought me to realize how managing my schedule regularly is important. As it is seen,

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lost an opportunity, but

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got great value from the case.

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, having

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reward is needed in order to have

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the peaceful

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mindset.

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, we can invest

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some

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hard

thing with the mindset that

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we are

possible

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to face our fear in peace. If we try to avoid the situation after investing

something

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in something

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big because of the risk we will

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, people can never develop. From

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perspective, there are positive points when we face risky conditions. In opposite, the damage of our mentality after having bad surroundings will be

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so there are low possibility

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of controlling

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the aspect we should solve.

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, some people bet a lot of money

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the fund and

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amount loss of money after that they think it is not simple to recover themselves for

long

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a long

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time. Another negative

points

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of the issue

is

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are

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unwelcome results prevent people

to grow

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from growing

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their

self confidence

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self-confidence

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. From my friend's experience, she once failed

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big exam and got

dissapointed

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disappointed

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herself a lot,

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finally

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finally,

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she gave up

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on taking

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a test once again. Like

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, from personal lives

getting

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taking

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risks

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is unhealthy. It is hard to find

out

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apply

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one right answer

that

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to

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advantages

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the advantages

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of having

risks

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jump over the disadvantages. But if we take time enough

for focussing

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to focus

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on

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advantages

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the advantages

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from

risks

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and try to improve on our own from

previous

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i

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think the

advantages

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exceed the

disvantages

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disadvantages

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