Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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a big part of our lives

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adults and

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of

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brought plenty of

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and useful tools in education for

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, there are good influences of using smartphones for

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. In my opinion, there are more merits for

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using smart devices. I will

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discuss

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topic. First of all,

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is well known that

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could be a useful way to educate

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without controlling by

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. There are so many sources and educational materials on online

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that

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can enjoy and learn

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. It

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could be said that smart

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could be helpful for busy

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like working moms or single

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, by using

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children

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can interact with their friends regardless of location and time.

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means that

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could make a bond with other people with developed technology.

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, during the world

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pandemic

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couldn't go outside and hang out with their friends directly.

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, thanks to

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, they

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communicate with their friends

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anywhere, anytime. From

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point of view,

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could be used in a good way to build relationships and

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.

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need to contact

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their

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directly and

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make

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bond.

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, if

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spend more time with

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than their

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, the

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will rely on

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more which leads to losing

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communication

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demerits of using smartphones

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occur

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addiction. Addiction to

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is very difficult to handle after it once happened. Like

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using smart devices.

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above, it seems like using

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has more effective and

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positive

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. In conclusion,

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would like to say if

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can control

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by themselves well,

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would be a great teacher for them.