The bar graph below shows the numbers of male and female research students studying six computer science subjects at a US university in 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph illustrates the volume of male and female candidates
research
studying six different computer science subjects at a US university in the year 2011.
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researched
Overall
, out of six ,thesis four were
pursued more by male students, Correct subject-verb agreement
was
only
in linguistics Correct word choice
and only
female
candidates surpassed Add a missing verb
did female
males
.
Firstly
, In linguistics number of females taking Add an article
the course
course
is over 100,000 Fix the agreement mistake
courses
when
Correct word choice
while
males
were under 100,000,
but in psychology males
are slightly higher Change preposition
than then
then
opposite gender, both are in similar quantity studying natural science, and again in engineering and programming Correct your spelling
the
males
are around 150,000 and females are under 100,000, there is huge
jump in Add an article
a huge
males
pursuing mathematics women's are lowest in this
subject below 50,000.
Lastly
, when compared between all six subjects, guys are studing
computer science when compared to colleen students, Only in one course they were Correct your spelling
studying
in
equal and in another they were more but in Change preposition
apply
remaining
all Correct article usage
the remaining
males
were dominating ladies at US university
in 2011.Fix the agreement mistake
universities
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