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Some people think that museums’ main function is to educate people, the others suggest that they can also serve for entertainment purposes. What is your opinion?

#people #museums’ #function #entertainment #purposes
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 couple of decades we observe
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 of older people.
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 society to develop new ways and approaches to interact with past generations and psychological aspects of
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 ought to be taken into account by authorities and scientific agencies. Our survey was aiming at providing sufficient materials on the mentioned theme Feeling about
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 The main point outlined in our whole work, provided by the overwhelming proportion of correspondents in each age group, is fear of upcoming withering of your physical abilities,
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 in mental activity
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 inclusiveness of the most experienced representatives of our society in local and global processes. What means are needed to solve the current problem will be provided below What is to be changed In
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 of our scientific
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 between so-called boomers and other social groups.
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 we will be able to integrate them and change dramatically attitudes towards them In conclusion I am grateful to the HQ of
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 for material support and believe that
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 of our work will be valuable not only for
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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • tangible connection
  • historical artifacts
  • multimedia presentations
  • hands-on learning
  • ignite curiosity
  • cultural significance
  • interactive exhibits
  • engaging workshops
  • adapt to diverse audience
  • traditional education means
  • tourist attraction
  • local economy
  • educational institutions
  • entertainment value
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