Recently, some companies assert that
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products
which Correct pronoun usage
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they produce, are totally modern and beneficial. As far as I am concerned,
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outweigh
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which I will demonstrate in the following essay.
First and foremost, companies are aimed to make a high demand and try to force people to buy
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productFix the agreement mistake
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to have a profitable deal. A very good example is, apple brand, every year
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version of
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that have variety
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facilities and is secure anywhere and anytime. What is more, reputable brands have
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of competition in the market, so their target is to have a noticeable proportion of
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.
For instance
,
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black Friday most
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offer
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to have a considerable
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,
therefore
, when citizens buy a well-known and high-quality brand with strong service, a huge company competition will make through
this
retail.
However
, I believe that
this
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rather than merits.
Firstly
, children may get negative feedback from advertising, as they influence simply through
products
that probably seem more harmful and useless
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them,
thus
, they put
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parents under pressure
due to
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them to get goods at any cost.
For instance
, if a
child
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a profitable toy on Tv frequently, if he or she nags and yells at
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to buy the toy
finally
, the child will be considered
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a spoiled child and an appropriate upbringing process will be demolished.
Moreover
, unrecycled commercial
products
, which we do not really need or never used and are bought without purpose, definitely can be destroyed the environment.
In other words
, these materials end up in landfills and
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will be polluted.
In addition
, people who can not afford to buy
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and high-tech
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,
for example
, may feel overwhelmed and
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,
as a consequence
, we will have an unfair
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inequality society that some do not meet secondary needs and do not have life satisfaction as well.
In conclusion, it is crystal clear that
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companies produce their
products
in
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, as they will make
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and create
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high demand, it is human responsibility to preserve the planet because nowadays most profitable goods are unrecycled and have a serious effect on the environment.