should human adapt to technology or should technology be adapted to us? Is technology making us intellectually weaker or more intelligent? Discuss both views and give your point.
Nowadays,
technology
becomes needs
in human life. Some Fix the agreement mistake
need
people
say that technology
could make human
to be more intelligent, but others say the opposite, that Fix the agreement mistake
humans
technology
brings human's
Change noun form
human
intellectual
to be Replace the word
intellect
more weak
. In Replace the words
weaker
this
essay
I will give Add a comma
,essay
explanation
Add an article
an explanation
about
two views and give examples.
Change preposition
of
To begin
with, from the first view, we could say that, in order to invented
a new Change the verb
invent
technology
, people
should doing
research for Wrong verb form
do
years
, including read
Wrong verb form
reading
the
journals and Correct article usage
apply
paper
. They Fix the agreement mistake
papers
also
have to design the technology
and test them before it
Change the pronoun
its
Add a missing verb
is launch
launch
. Change the verb form
launches
For instance
, the first computer that invented
Add a missing verb
was invented
years
ago was as big as a bedroom, however
, after scientist
studied for decades, they Fix the agreement mistake
scientists
finally
can make it smaller as
it is now. Correct word choice
than
That
is
means they learned a lot to Unnecessary verb
apply
invented
something new. Wrong verb form
invent
Next,
it forces people
to adaptive
. As Replace the word
adapt
technology
become
more advance, Change the verb form
becomes
people
have to learn how to operate it. For example
, the electric car that completely different to traditional
one. Correct article usage
the traditional
People
who buy it,
will learn how to operate itRemove the comma
apply
,
and explore more what that car could do. It Remove the comma
apply
is
shows that Unnecessary verb
apply
people
will learn something and become more intelligent.
On the other hand
, technology
also
make
us intellectually weaker. Change the verb form
makes
First,
technology
can do anything for human
. 50 Fix the agreement mistake
humans
years
ago people
have to do anything manually, that
makes them do and think more. Correct pronoun usage
which
For example
, to do the
homework students in Correct article usage
apply
this
era just need to google it and everything would be there. They do not have to read a book or even solve they
own math Correct pronoun usage
their
task
with formulas, and it could bring Fix the agreement mistake
tasks
lazyness
to them. Correct your spelling
laziness
Second,
as human
rely more Fix the agreement mistake
humans
to
Change the preposition
on
upon
the
Correct article usage
apply
technology
, they reduce the
thinking in Change the word
their
everday
life. Something that they know would be faded by Correct your spelling
everyday
technology
. For instance
, in
Change preposition
on
the
Correct article usage
a
in
Change preposition
apply
farm
, the farmers could tell the Add an article
the farm
a farm
rippeness
of the fruit by looking Correct your spelling
ripeness
or
touching it Change preposition
at or
years
ago. But now since they harvesting by high technology
machine
, Fix the agreement mistake
machines
young
generation's Correct article usage
the young
farmer
could not have that ability anymore.
Fix the agreement mistake
farmers
To conclude
, human should adapt to the
Correct article usage
apply
technology
because it make
Change the verb form
makes
they
more intelligent by Correct pronoun usage
them
research
it and Wrong verb form
researching
make
them more Change the verb form
makes
ability
to operate it.Replace the word
able
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