You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while your are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to this fiend. In your letter: -give details of your study plans -explain why you want to get a part-time job -suggest how your friend could help you find a job

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Dear Sam, I hope you are doing great. Looks like I have not seen you
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ages, excited to meet you soon. I just want to let you know that I am coming to Toronto, Canada next month on
study
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permit and I am thinking to work part-time off-campus
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studies. Let me give you some information regarding my course and
college
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where I took the
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. So
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got enrolled in Nursing Management in Seneca
Colllege
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College
, batch starting from March 2023 in Toronto campus. I received my classes schedule already via email, so my classes will be from Monday to Wednesday every week. As you know already, how hard it was for my father to pay my
tution
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tuition
fee,
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do not want to let him suffer more because of me. That's why I am thinking to do
part-time
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job to arrange money for my monthly expenses and want to save some cash for next
semester
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fee
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. I really expect
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you to help me in finding
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job near my college campus as I found accommodation near my college. I request you
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gather some information regarding
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names, online applications,
any
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and any
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websites through which I can apply for
job
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a job
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. I would really
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. Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours
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friend Honey
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